dA is pretty niceI'm impressed.
P.S. I'd like critique on my poetry, and that's all that I'm going to post on dA, along with other pieces of self-created literature. I'm not very good with art.
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Meek SubmissionI'm a sinner in love, I destroyed him, tore him to shreds; And I gave him away, to the gods above.Meek Submission
No one else had ever loved me so deeply; My mind betrayed the heart that throbbed, I followed another, ever so meekly.
A poet, I so barely am, With a stranger, I so swiftly ran, The time passed before I realised, A stranger was my love's death disguised.
A sharp pain, it gives a blow so hard, I was taken, completely off my guard; I knew naught of how much he adored me, He went off, this life of mine is now completely barred.
This littl
by ~ldp2
Too LateI loved her, and my love was pure, My love for her, it did endure; Through her ages with other men, How did I not get lost, in this lonely glen?Too Late
This time, I had to go outright, Perhaps, this feeling would see the light; It might be too late to get her now, The red corners of my heart would be charred black.
When I finally told her, expressed my love, It was a bit too late, but I did bow; She adored him as much as I did her, With her, I could barely concur.
The despair I felt is too great for words, The day I spent, like a lost pack of birds; &n
by ~ldp2
A Shattered Glass"Happily ever after," I'd said, Never did I, this moment dread; She grew more distant as time passed, 'twas not enough, the love I'd amassed;A Shattered Glass
We stopped meeting, one fine day; My following weeks were spent in dismay; All I could do was wait and wait, She didn't return to fill this gap so great;
I think she's left me, in my times of joy, I can't fathom what would this way destroy; My love, my life, my drug, my all, Why did I, so sharply fall?
This heart lives on as a shattered glass, I keep trying to make this nightmare pass; A reason, a tr
by ~ldp2
A New AddictionHer eyes pierced mine, They would put leaves on fire; When met by gaze, Could set ablaze a pyre.A New Addiction
Her face glowed brightly, Like a diamond amidst coal; She haunted my life, Engulfed me, whole.
I need not say more, For words fail to describe her; I may go on all day, My mind can’t get by her.
Her mere appearance has left me, In pure, sheer awe; Dare I say more? She has me bound – with a wide-open jaw.
She stands out in my thoughts, Like a beacon she burns; I say, I have a new addiction, As I sit
by ~ldp2
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Hope it works!
Supposedly The Phone Will Ring
Right After You Do This.
Just read the little stories and
Think of a wish as you scroll all
The way to the bottom. There is
A message there - then make your
Wish.
No attachment on this one.
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Stories
I'm 13 years old, and I wished
That my dad would come home from
The army, because he'd been having
Problems with his heart and right
Leg It was 2:53 p .m.. When I made
My wish. At 3: 07 PM . (14 minutes
Later), the doorbell rang, and
There my Dad was, luggage and all!!
I'm Katie and I'm 20 and I've been
Having trouble in my job and on the
Verge of quitting. I made a simple
Wish that my boss would get a new
Job. That was at 1:35 and at 2:55
There was an announcement that he
Was promoted and was leaving for
Another city. Believe me...this
Really works!!!
My name is Ann and I am 45 years
Of age. I had always been single
And had been hoping to get into a
Nice, loving relationship for many
Years. While kind of daydreaming(and right after receiving this email)
I wished that a quality person would
Finally come into my life. That was at
9:10 AM on a Tuesday. At 9:55 AM
A FedEx delivery man came into my
Office.He was cute, polite and
Could not stop smiling at me. He
Started coming back almost everyday(even without packages) and asked me
Out a week later . We married 6
Months later and now have been
Happily married for 2 years.
What a great email it was!!
Just scroll down to the end, but
While you do, think of a wish.
Make your wish when you have completed
Scrolling. Whatever age you are, is the
Number of minutes it will take for your
Wish to come true. Ex.you are 25 years
Old, it will take 25 minutes for your wish
To come true).
However, if you don't send this to
People in 5 minutes, you will have bad
Luck for years!!
Go for it!!!
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SCROLL DOWN!!!!
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Congratulations!!! Your wish will
Now come true in your age minutes.
Now follow this carefully....it
Can be very rewarding!!!!
If you send this to 10 more
People, other than the 5 that you
Already have to send to, something
Major that you've been wanting
Will happen.
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Remember ~posiekitty.
She's frolicking in those pink clouds in the sky now...in a better place.
Put this in your signature if you knew or miss that sweet little angel.
"Left...Right...Left...Right. You disgust me!" -Death the Kid
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